http://travellinbaen.com/2010/01/28/the-lost-letter/ "I travel not to go anywhere, but to go. I travel for travel's sake. The great affair is to move." --Robert Louis Stevenson Sat, 04 Feb 2012 20:01:06 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ http://travellinbaen.com/2010/01/28/the-lost-letter/#comment-7120 Fri, 29 Jan 2010 03:07:21 +0000 http://travellinbaen.com/?p=2296#comment-7120 sounds like more than only 1 page to follow – curiosity is peaked…

]]> http://travellinbaen.com/2010/01/28/the-lost-letter/#comment-7117 Thu, 28 Jan 2010 19:48:09 +0000 http://travellinbaen.com/?p=2296#comment-7117 You could write two versions and let us decide which we like better.

]]> http://travellinbaen.com/2010/01/28/the-lost-letter/#comment-7116 Thu, 28 Jan 2010 19:23:27 +0000 http://travellinbaen.com/?p=2296#comment-7116 The story lends itself to being told as a mystery/thriller, but I am leaning toward tragi-comedy. I just don’t know how to end it. Come to think of it, I’m not sure where to go with it on page 2 yet, but I thought if I roughed out page one it might help.

]]> http://travellinbaen.com/2010/01/28/the-lost-letter/#comment-7112 Thu, 28 Jan 2010 16:05:00 +0000 http://travellinbaen.com/?p=2296#comment-7112 I agree with the first two – makes me want to turn the page!

]]> http://travellinbaen.com/2010/01/28/the-lost-letter/#comment-7109 Thu, 28 Jan 2010 14:24:14 +0000 http://travellinbaen.com/?p=2296#comment-7109 Page 2! Page 2! Page 2!

]]> http://travellinbaen.com/2010/01/28/the-lost-letter/#comment-7108 Thu, 28 Jan 2010 14:15:11 +0000 http://travellinbaen.com/?p=2296#comment-7108 I agree with Jessie Lou. I’m dying to read more. Your writing is fantastic.

]]> http://travellinbaen.com/2010/01/28/the-lost-letter/#comment-7107 Thu, 28 Jan 2010 14:03:26 +0000 http://travellinbaen.com/?p=2296#comment-7107 I am intrigued by several parts which to me is the biggest hurdle …. to make your reader want to know more.

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